Monday, April 24, 2006

Form Letters

Dear Aunt Mary,

Thank you very much for the draft of the essay on Word War II Japanese Cipher Systems that you turned in on Friday. What an interesting idea! I really liked your careful research and the way you drew connections to other material that we studied this semester. Additionally, your essay is well written and engaging. However, the section on the PURPLE machine could be expanded somewhat and your conclusion might benefit from some careful editing.

I'm sorry that I missed the chance to see you and Uncle Dave at Easter, and I hope the two of you are doing well. I'm looking forward to reading your final draft next week!

Love, Becky